Complex arguments often begin by challenging a popular belief. An essay on failure argues that the celebration of failure “is almost always told backwards”, from the point of view of people who later succeeded. It introduces survivorship bias: mistaking the visible survivors for the whole picture.
Strong writers qualify their claims (“None of this means that we should fear failure”) and redefine key terms: they call for respecting failure rather than praising it.
To evaluate, consider the logic of each step, the quality of evidence, the treatment of counter-arguments and whether the conclusion follows from what came before.
Worked example
What is survivorship bias?
- We hear stories mainly from those who succeeded.
- We wrongly assume their experience represents everyone.
Answer:Drawing conclusions only from visible successes and ignoring the many failures.
Key words
- qualify
- limit or refine a claim
- survivorship bias
- judging by the survivors only
- redefine
- give a new meaning to a term
New questions every time.
Common Core-referenced: RI.11-12.6, RI.11-12.3